Queen of the Stars
Dummy picture book, sequel to The Girl Who Walked to the Moon.
Little Tessa is in such a hurry to be the first woman on the moon, she forgets to notice the stars along the way. Will she slow down enough to remember why she launched into space in the first place? In this heart warming misadventure Tessa comes face to face with the strongest force in the universe. Will she conquer all?
Feedback from SCBWI critique group suggests making a complicated story into 2 simpler stories.